Could I get some feedback on the beginnings of a song im writing?

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OK...Thanks!

I'll keep expirimenting with the volume and panning of each vocal tracks.

Thanks Everyone for all your feedback!

-Scott
 
hey,
I liked that tune buddy. I think your voice sounds alot like the guy from "they might be giants". i also agree that there is too much panning but obviously you're fixing that up now. Is Eloise a fictitious character??? If not are you gonna show her this song? ??
 
yiordanaki said:
hey,
I liked that tune buddy. I think your voice sounds alot like the guy from "they might be giants". i also agree that there is too much panning but obviously you're fixing that up now. Is Eloise a fictitious character??? If not are you gonna show her this song? ??
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Hey Thanks...

Yes Eloise if a fictitious character...

-Scott
 
scottn5388 said:
Hey...I fixed the vocal tracks for the song.

I reduced the panning on each track and cut the volume a little for one of the tracks....

Hows this sound?
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A lot better!That sounds a whole lot better than the extreme panning you had going on before.This also covers up some of the miscues on the doubled vocals.

Do you have enough words to do this as a whole song?

Nice adjustment scott.
 
I do have all of the lyrics...Ive just been quite busy and havnt had much time to record the rest of them.

Thanks,
Scott
 
14, jeesh, lot of young people here lately posting good stuff!!!
i wish i would have started young.

good start man!! i want to hear a finished version!! bring it on!!!

thank's

peace

rick
 
Hey...Thanks Man!

Im gonna be gone for couple weeks but when I get back I will continue recording it, and hopefully I will have it finished by the end of the summer!

Thanks to everyone for thier feedback!

~Scott
 
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