
heatmiser
mr. green christmas
Ok, so I posted this tune back in July and generally the feedback was pretty positive, but there was a long rambling jam-a-thon in the middle and the whole thing was so weighed down with crazy effects that I found it to be kind of muddled sounding.
I re-did the song this past weekend and tried to clean it up and make it more accessible (changed the arrangement somewhat as well). Did I overdo it? Am I now left with something too stripped-down and simple? How did I do production-wise?
Please let me know what you think as I am involved in a very gradual process of self-improvement and all of you folks here have been instrumental in whatever steps forward I have taken. Thank you so much for that.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=660667&songID=6461808
I re-did the song this past weekend and tried to clean it up and make it more accessible (changed the arrangement somewhat as well). Did I overdo it? Am I now left with something too stripped-down and simple? How did I do production-wise?
Please let me know what you think as I am involved in a very gradual process of self-improvement and all of you folks here have been instrumental in whatever steps forward I have taken. Thank you so much for that.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=660667&songID=6461808