Cleaning lady

sava66

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Cleaning Lady

The cleaning lady called again
To complain
About the blood you left on the walls.
And the blood you left in the halls.
And there was blood on the sink
On the floor of the shower
And the mirror and the toilet.
There was a liver lying
Raw and Aimless in the kitchen
An appendix on the couch
A pair of blue eyes even staring up at me from my soup.
And of course she didn't like at all
The messy heart you left
Still Beating in my bed.

You were supposed to come out
Left you alone at my house
Danced in dark by myself-
played your favorite song twice
Thought about your body
While I kissed someone else

The cleaning lady
called again
To complain
About the mess you left on the walls.-
in the halls.
Now I remember
when you unplunged
Blood and tar
Splattered out
from That needle
You brought all the way from -
Paris that day
Loved that day

Blue eyes white pupils turning
The blacker bulb starts burning-
Zombie mind just blazing
Droning tune shoegazing
Guess I don't have to guess
Lying in your last caress

I'll just pick up, where you left off
Tv down, get fixed up

The cleaning lady
called again
To complain
About the blood you left on the walls.-
in the halls.
Now I remember
when you unplunged
Blood and tar
Splattered out
from That needle
You brought from all the way from
Paris that day
Loved that day

She's got so tired of seeing
Messy organs beating (beat)
Rifling through your waste
Looking for a taste
Needles cookers swabs
Placid bedroom swans

Why don't you give your veins a rest
Scoot on over, ill take the rest

Cleaning lady doesn't like
The messy heart
that you left Still Beating
in my bed just last night

As u disappeared right
out the door bass
 
It reads a bit clumsily
If I were your editor you'd end up with:

The Cleaning Lady

The cleaning lady rang again
To complain
About the blood you left on the walls.
And in the halls.
Blood on the sink
The shower floor
The mirror and the toilet.
A liver lying
Raw and bloodless in the kitchen
An appendix on the couch
Blue eyes staring from the soup.
She didn't like it at all
The broken heart you left
while beating in my bed.

You were supposed to come out
I left you in my house
I danced in the dark by myself
They played your song twice
I thought about your body
While I kissed someone else

The cleaning lady
came again
To complain
About the mess you left on the walls.-
in the halls.
Now I remember
when you fixed up
Blood and tar
Splattered out
from the needle
You brought all the way from -
Paris that day
Loved that day

Blue eyes, wide pupils turning
The blacker bulb starts burning-
Addict mind just blazing
Droning tune shoegazing
Guess? I don't have to guess
Puddled in your last caress

I'll just pick up where you left off
TV down, fixed up & drown

She's tired of seeing
Organs decomposing
I've been rifling through your waste
Searching for a taste
Needles, cookers, swabs
Placid bedroom swans

Cleaning lady doesn't like
The messy heart
that you left bleating
in my bed
Just last night

She came to clean
As you staggered
Out the door
Once more

PS The vocals are too distorted.
Have a listen to The Residents Third Reich n Roll or Fingerprintz for a smudgier but better template.
 
Thanks rayc. Helpful feedback. I'm working on better equipment, mixes, and of course vocals. I think I need to learn how to mix:) any other feedback is appreciated.
 
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