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TripleM
Well-known member
I don't know rap real well. But that sounded pretty good to me.
Vocals sound a little brittle and cheap. But not terrible.
You might have a low end problem. Sounded a little rumbly.
Vocals sound a little brittle and cheap. But not terrible.
You might have a low end problem. Sounded a little rumbly.
rayc
retroreprobate
The singing lacks any mids or bottom end.
The backing seems to be pretty generic - did you record it or download it? There are no suprises nor any dancing happening.
The rap, well thematically it's pretty stale, the Mary Jane double entendre was old when Black Sabbath did Sweet Leaf on Masters of Reality.
The featured folk don't stand out much.
The backing seems to be pretty generic - did you record it or download it? There are no suprises nor any dancing happening.
The rap, well thematically it's pretty stale, the Mary Jane double entendre was old when Black Sabbath did Sweet Leaf on Masters of Reality.
The featured folk don't stand out much.
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InsomniaMusic
New member
Wow Ray really didn't like it. It's just a basic weed song not that serious
rayc
retroreprobate
It's not that I didn't like it but rather that it didn't bring anything new to the dakka in joke story.
I just felt you've sold yourself a little short.
If it's going to be a weed wheeze then slacken the tempo to something approaching dub or mis 70's reggae, get the sound effects in, sample some Cheech & Chong as well as the intro to Sweet Leaf & twist/play with them a bit, create some spaces in the mix and listen to Peter Tosh's Legalize It for the positive spin that you should insert in a few spots as most of the blunt jokes are blunt after so much use.
I just felt you've sold yourself a little short.
If it's going to be a weed wheeze then slacken the tempo to something approaching dub or mis 70's reggae, get the sound effects in, sample some Cheech & Chong as well as the intro to Sweet Leaf & twist/play with them a bit, create some spaces in the mix and listen to Peter Tosh's Legalize It for the positive spin that you should insert in a few spots as most of the blunt jokes are blunt after so much use.
heatmiser
mr. green christmas
I thought this sounded really pretty good.
I'm with triple M on the vocals (slight harshness in the high mids maybe?) and the bass (could it be a little stronger and tighter?), but overall, I thought it sounded pretty well produced.
I'm not in a "studio" though and have zero experience trying to produce anything like this myself, so...
I'm with triple M on the vocals (slight harshness in the high mids maybe?) and the bass (could it be a little stronger and tighter?), but overall, I thought it sounded pretty well produced.
I'm not in a "studio" though and have zero experience trying to produce anything like this myself, so...