Check out my mixing

[paokz]

Hey guys..Can you tell me your opinion about the mixing of this song?
I mean that i saw too many videos from lynda exaplined and other companies..
And i think i did good mixing
My new song is coming

 

[Iechineband]

Well, everything is clean and balanced. But the mix isnt particularly interesting either. It doesnt need to go overboard wet with effects, but it feels very sterile to me.

 

[paokz]

What do you mean sterile?

 

[rayc]

Sterile: infertile; scrupulously clean to prevent infection; boring.
he's right the mix seems balanced more or less but the vocal is bland and the arrangement, in the snippet provided, doesn't grab my attention in any way.
It doesn't help having the same phrase repeated ad nauseum so I may have become biased based on that fact.

 

[paokz]

oH I understand what you mean..I think the full version will be more full!!