the chorus to driver or inner city whichever it is called is on point, an amazing hook could be built with that. i don't really like the other piece of the tune, but the switch was necessary to keep the chorus sounding fresh, so i hear where you are going but i would have taken a different approach.
did you play the string part also, or sample it?
i like the beat as well.
stringers doesn't have the same driving chorus as driver but the instrumentation is done well and your drum track has some nice fills.
ps. you should get someone to spit over these tracks.