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my dad was a bodyman
i used to stroll in asking for money for my $55 dollar perm and say thanks



while smelling the death fumes of his paints


at home his strained frustrations would not fade away
but


fab job the rich men would say


thinking of the macaroni noodle card hanging in his office i made
i told the lady fab job

shit is life, lies are life, wind is piss, life is shit, somewhere deep in my heart he's suffering, and this is it
 
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We Couldn't Think of a Title was the name of Psychostick's first album.
 
cool, i never heard of psychostick maybe i should check them out. i always wonder if i should ever even bother with a title. btw, i regretted posting this one lol, :o it sucks! sucks bigtime:eek: i thought i saw a regretful thread around here somewhere i should've posted it there:D thanks again for mentioning that
 
cantthinkofname said:
my dad was a bodyman
i used to stroll in asking for money for my $55 dollar perm and say thanks



while smelling the death fumes of his paints


at home his strained frustrations would not fade away
but


fab job the rich men would say


thinking of the macaroni noodle card hanging in his office i made
i told the lady fab job

shit is life, lies are life, wind is piss, life is shit, somewhere deep in my heart he's suffering, and this is it
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This is a great set of lyrics; unusual, original, with great images: "smelling the death fumes of his paints", and "macaroni noodle card hanging in his office".

I'm curious to see how this translates into music.
 
The song is obviously called "fab job."

At least it's pretty obvious to me....I mean it's the only thing that's in there twice.

:)
 
gecko zzed said:
This is a great set of lyrics; unusual, original, with great images: "smelling the death fumes of his paints", and "macaroni noodle card hanging in his office".

I'm curious to see how this translates into music.
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thank you, i was listening to some guitar stuff i recorded not long after i wrote it, and just when i thought it belongs in the can, it (parts of it) sort of fell together with the guitar

all i have to record with at the moment is a cheap video camera which sounds horrible so at the moment hard to share anything, hopefully in the future when i can afford some decent equipment :D thank you again

The song is obviously called "fab job."

At least it's pretty obvious to me....I mean it's the only thing that's in there twice.
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lol wish14, that's the part i disliked the most, 'fab job' how corny is that i don't even think i've ever even said the word fab in my whole life, don't know where that came from ha ha that part is definitly going out, thank you for your idea tho, it is in there twice and that does make sense:)

Smelling the Death
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EdWonbass, good possibility, thanks
 
i'd recomend This Is It. its short and sweet and leaves room for imagination. its a little cliche to use the last words of the song, but i think it adds a nice effect. plus, its less cliche than using the most commonly repeated words in the song.
 
thanks i was either thinking of this is it or shit wind
 
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