Can Someone give me advice on my song? (Rap/Hip Hop)

[CDC Productions]

Ok so i'm making a full length self produced album and need some advice on this song so far, also if anyone feels like featuring on the 2nd verse let me know.

https://soundcloud.com/user-944345268/i-made-it

 

[RoyD RaGe]

You looking for a sound engineer to mix? Im bored ill do it for free...