Appreciate some honest feedback

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Yeah the beginning of that first tune...

it sound just like that new switchfoot tune, you gotta change that.

Uhm...the stuff has a punky vibe, I like the second tune..."starmap"
but the vocals in the chorus seem to actually be weaker in the chorus in contrast to verses...
the "energy" of the vocals during verses is so/so but the chorus it just sounds so half-hearted..it's kinda of let down...you should be screaming that sh*t out or something..

Jake was hitting on this...about with punk vocals not having to be right on..but because you're doing that style (or it sounds that way) if you're not "feeling" it (getting some balls behind it)..it just falls flat.

but I do dig the tunes...from what I can hear..they're played pretty well other than a couple funky guitar notes at the end of starmap and I think the drummer flubbed a couple of times in that one as well. But they're good tunes and I think the vocalist are good for this style you just need to get a little more balls out.

keep it up.

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another post - another 2 cents
 
sorry for reviving a dead thread, but i'd like to thank some people for actually pointing out something i have said before (but was heavily ridiculed by most folks here). mainly shookie jones and his qucik little blurb about punk vocals not having to be right on and also jake-owa for his little snippets.
 
u no Ime speleng chalunged.......wy yu maikin funn uv mee? :D
 
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