Anyone have some lyrics they dont want?

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Whats up fam! Im about to TRY to do another track over my cuzo's house and I was wondering if muh second family had a song for me. Becuz as yall could tell from muh first joint I CANT write raps...poetry=yes, rap=no....one might say its the same but not for me...my writing style for poetry has NO place in the rap world. So is it possible for someone to toss some lyrics my way? I know J.D and Bow Wow do it............Also can yall please give me some vocal production tips? Na Na Na....Im DEMANDING IT! :p sike naw please fam


~Noddy
 
I got lots of lyrics I don't want...lol but the thing is they aren't full songs and unless you were to rap them to the beats I wrote them to (or similar bpm) I don't think they'd sound right. And I'd have to give you an audio file to show you how certain words were said etc... If you want em, sure... but there's a reason I don't want them...lol


As far as vocal tips, just remember a little goes a long way. I still got that preamp for u Noddy if you can come across a mic (I can't come up off my first mic...lol). Back in the day I used to use this TubeMP and a MXLV93 mic going directly into my cpu's sound card. I even got a 24bit soundblaster Audigy Z2 usb sound card or something like that if you want it, it's not ideal for recording but it's better than a 16 bit stock card. SO get u a mic lil homey.
 
lol I got a closet full of lyrics... Some ok, some suck ass...


what kinda style you need? Here's a sample of a verse I threw away:

I hear em gunshots streamin' by my ear/
what I have to live for? death is not another part of my fears/
escaping life as a tear when i'm closin my eyes/
i living with a passion witness as these years pass me by/
these streets are cold and i'm frozen in the game I play/
part of another level, im' trying to reach along da way/
they love to do it dirty, so i feel like i'm loosing again/
I'm kinda mad at the world, and im' getting a little tense/
i never chose to be a gangsta, but da gangsta chose me/
i ain't tryin' to hurt nobody, i'm just hea 2 stack g's/
and tell the world what I know, this my stage, this my show/
the hood gots no sorrow, so i'm ridin' alone/
I got caught in a updraft and I couldn't get down/
escaping death and I ain't loosing not this time around/
if your faced with this situation, square your shoulders off/
hold your head up high my young homies, and aim for those stars/


or

till my eyez envision all these breathless moments/
cast away through these empty years that been stolen/
i heard a faint cry, tossed up within' life's commotions/
and if i listen, be bounded by these words I heard spoken/
my head above the horizon, signs of hope peekin' out/
sunlight cuttin' clouds, better days comin' 4 me now/
picture life mediocre, hardships kept us on grounds/
thought i was lost till i heard your voice, a beautiful sound/
my intentions lay deep beyound my roots that kept me real/
hunger for a thirst by godes tears, go past my last meal/

or

everything is going krazie, everything is out of place/
if i don't stop this shit on the spot, i'll catcha case/ (fuck)
my flame is still burning, and it's burning forever/
i'm like a bird in cold weather about to loose all his feathers/
here's a toast of death to this encaged, raging animal/
a cannibal with a sickness and no antidote/

or

The way of life, It's starting to get little drastik/
Victim of the casket Causing these niggaz to get blasted/
I'm earning my stripes while these niggaz doing strange thangs/
hold em up nigga, i'll show you what this flame brings/
but we'll see who will be the first to loose they breath/
lately your the one walking alone marked with death/
keep on pushing my buttons, sooner or later you'll push the wrong one/
I'll break you down to nothing,homie, show you all my hand guns/

those are the only ones I'm probably throwing away that's on my computer
 
eh, the audigy 2 still is 16 bit, that converts to 24 bit, and they advertise it as 24 bit, even though it's not really true 24 bit.. I had a friend who was Creative's guy who goes out and gets companies to sell their products or whatever. He told me that the new X-Fi's are actually 24 bit, but all the other ones claiming to be 24 bit were not... Except for the E-MU brand that is.
 
I didn't know that but I damn sure believe it...lol I bought that thing like 4 years ago not knowing much about recording, it's good for gaming though. At the time it was supposed to be the sh*t, I dropped like $175 on it around when it first came out. These days I stay away from ALL creative products even the Emu's. It's probably still better than an intregrated soundcard which a lot of new PC's come with these days. I also have a Firewire Solo "You don't hear me" was recorded on that (the VTB1 and ProVLA), I never use it either but it did come in handy when my 1010 was off for repair. I'm thinking of selling it my VTB1 and whack ass 3630 (sorry noddy those I can't give away...lol).
 
lol I made the mistake of buying the VTB-1 too.... Thinking of opening it up and replacing the tube in it to make it sound a lot better, I know that we replaced the tube in this behringer preamp, and it now rivals against Millinium pre's that are in the thousands... I also used to have the audigy 2 platinum. I thought it was the shit really lol. I liked the remote control feature.. Never used it for recording though, most of the use were for music & other media played on my TV
 
lol Ment thats kool homie...I knew I could depend on you two..Ment I get my check on the 29th so I should be getting my mic shortly after that(any suggestions) K Lord can I please get that first track? I think I can put some underground type ish 2getha with that. Ay I was wondering when is the correct time to use adlibs?...Thanx 1000000 guys
 
Noddy, if you want a sample of my style, peep this:

The second verse flows a lil' better I think

I don't want you listenin' to the music,
You gotta hear what I'm saying,
And that "you" is plural, so,
From your perspective, "we",
Pure truth, I ain't playin',
So FEEL IT before you taste defeat,
And I whip y'all niggas up like cream of wheat
That feeds the weak, so alter your actuality,
Patriotic mu'fuckas can't face reality,
I'm American but fuck AmeriKKKa,
Hauled away by pigs that claim I'm hysterical,
I lock this rhyme in beat like a stylus in a wax groove,
Premeditated lyricist like CL Smooth - forever movin',
And my state of whyme defines my mood,
When the jealous cowards attack,
I'm prepared with a mind that's stacked with rhymes intact,
In times of stress, my brain react madly,
Triggered by the fools that can't discern lie from fact,
In fact, they utterly lack the ability to honestly rap,
Thus establishing where my tier is at,
When compared to these toys with synthesized dope rhymes,
Plus, I keep my tempo in mind, thus pacin'
the flow that's unarguably sacred,

Yeah, the ballad of the sacred artists,
Next to whom, all these nouveau-suckas look retarded,
That's right, intellectuals, we the smartest,
We got heart, so we send prayers to departed,
Anyways, on the false I won't dwell,
So please not another rhyme about ya crack sales,
An overdone feat, like bad food, that style is overcooked,
Like my rhymes is overlooked but that don't get me faded,
I don't care, long as by hip hop, I'm appreciated,
How will I fare on the no-end path? It's confusing,
So I'm perusin' writings in search of wisdom,
Fifteen but already got the grays creepin' in on the side,
Every breath is sacred, so my time I gotta bide,
I was told that my words could move mountains,
But that leaves me wonderin' to what my work's ammounted,
Don't know when I go so I'll keep up this flow,
Liquid lyrics as if my pen was a water fountain,
Even if I'm forever a new jack, I'ma keep goin',
'cause only the real can truly do that, knowin',
The MC is only as sacred as the rhymes that he's makin',

I used to have the same problem as you - multisyllabular rhymes solve it though.
 
jibran said:
Noddy, if you want a sample of my style, peep this:

The second verse flows a lil' better I think



I used to have the same problem as you - multisyllabular rhymes solve it though.
Damn Jib Im feelin ur swag! I dont know if I was reading it right or not but it seemed nice..."multisybular rhymes" That may be the best lyric advice ive heard(I know thats sad but true) I too often here myself going...fuck/pluck, up/up, game/name...etc.
 
Mind, I actually loved the VTB1 in solid state but I out grew it and went for a real tube pre instead of the starved plate, but it's a really good budget pre. That's why I might keep it, not sure yet...lol I have like 6 different Pre's so I doubt I'll miss it.


Noddy on the cheaper side check into a SM57 Dynamic, that's like a must have for any type of music...lol Check into a MXL990 for a cheap condenser, I think Mindset might have a extra one hmmm..... ;)
 
Yo noddy you can have this if u want (it's to that beat vid i made). Don't mind the mix, it's bad quality and just thrown together.

 
Thats what Im gonna use Ment! thanx now all I gotta do iz write a corresponding hook and a 2nd verse or I can use 1 of Mindz verses...thanx fam
 
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