
Blue Bear Sound
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Re: The Second tune
You still have a way to go to get the balances right, as well as the clarity to many of the mix elements.......
For example, the drums sound cloudy and over-ambient (too much 'verb?)... the guitars don't sound very well-defined - kinda buzzy in a few spots.... I don't care for the blend of the background vocals... and as I'm getting towards the middle of the tune, that snare is really bad - loud and glaring, and doesn't have the snap it needs!
The lead vocal is not sitting quite right and that piano sounds like it might have been compressed a bit too much.
Aside from sound quality issues - I did notice a few performance issues regarding timing in a few spots......
Tighten-up the performance, rebalance the mix and you'll have yourself a pretty decent tune!
Keep at it...........!
Reminds me a bit a lo-fi sounding Stones tune!twonky said:Alright Ladies and Gentlemen here is the song I really wanted the advice on. Please give it a listen and if you have any suggestions on making the mix a bit better I would love to hear them.
http://artists.mp3s.com/artist_song/2573/2573638.html
You still have a way to go to get the balances right, as well as the clarity to many of the mix elements.......
For example, the drums sound cloudy and over-ambient (too much 'verb?)... the guitars don't sound very well-defined - kinda buzzy in a few spots.... I don't care for the blend of the background vocals... and as I'm getting towards the middle of the tune, that snare is really bad - loud and glaring, and doesn't have the snap it needs!
The lead vocal is not sitting quite right and that piano sounds like it might have been compressed a bit too much.
Aside from sound quality issues - I did notice a few performance issues regarding timing in a few spots......
Tighten-up the performance, rebalance the mix and you'll have yourself a pretty decent tune!
Keep at it...........!