Blue Bear Sound
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Re: The Second tune
You still have a way to go to get the balances right, as well as the clarity to many of the mix elements.......
For example, the drums sound cloudy and over-ambient (too much 'verb?)... the guitars don't sound very well-defined - kinda buzzy in a few spots.... I don't care for the blend of the background vocals... and as I'm getting towards the middle of the tune, that snare is really bad - loud and glaring, and doesn't have the snap it needs!
The lead vocal is not sitting quite right and that piano sounds like it might have been compressed a bit too much.
Aside from sound quality issues - I did notice a few performance issues regarding timing in a few spots......
Tighten-up the performance, rebalance the mix and you'll have yourself a pretty decent tune!
Keep at it...........!
Reminds me a bit a lo-fi sounding Stones tune!twonky said:Alright Ladies and Gentlemen here is the song I really wanted the advice on. Please give it a listen and if you have any suggestions on making the mix a bit better I would love to hear them.
http://artists.mp3s.com/artist_song/2573/2573638.html
You still have a way to go to get the balances right, as well as the clarity to many of the mix elements.......
For example, the drums sound cloudy and over-ambient (too much 'verb?)... the guitars don't sound very well-defined - kinda buzzy in a few spots.... I don't care for the blend of the background vocals... and as I'm getting towards the middle of the tune, that snare is really bad - loud and glaring, and doesn't have the snap it needs!
The lead vocal is not sitting quite right and that piano sounds like it might have been compressed a bit too much.
Aside from sound quality issues - I did notice a few performance issues regarding timing in a few spots......
Tighten-up the performance, rebalance the mix and you'll have yourself a pretty decent tune!
Keep at it...........!
And there are two ways to boost certain frequencies. You can either boost them or you can cut everything else. Both will accomplish essentially the same thing, but cutting everything else is more difficult but ultimately sounds better.

