Another song

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I'd like a little feedback on this tune....I know that the mix sucks( mixed after recording ) Some feedback on composition and arrangement would be helpful but, throw in anything else you feel like!! The song is " Old Man Howard " loosley based on a true story except that old man Howard is not dead and he never gave me anything except a beer or two! :D
http://soundclick.com/jaywilliams
 
please delete one of these threads........did not mean to double post!
 
Great singing...I love your voice. My girlfriend loves your music, too, but she wishes you'd post your lyrics. I think it would be a good idea since you tell good stories.
 
I never really thought about posting lyrics....might be a good idea......thanks for the listen!
 
There you go....posted the lyrics to Old Man Howard......will get to the rest of the asap!!!
 
Very well done. I like it.
The vox during chorus/bvox parts seems too loud - it pushes my headphones a little too much.
The slide is cool though it's very clean - a little more detune effect would dirty it up some.
 
Cool tune, and I agree that the voice is pretty damn good. Whole tune has a good sound...very nice stuff man. I also like the slide. Very cool.
Good stuff man....
 
I like this.It sounds like real music.Since you asked for ideas,I'll offer a few.
The lead guitar tone takes away from this tune.I would drop it out of the
mix altogether on the chorus,because it is making the mix way busy and
masking those nice harmony vox.A well placed hook with an appropriate guitar
tone would do much better IMHO.I would also consider the placement of the
harmony vox.Tagging the verse and leaving them sparse thru the chorus
could help keep them wondering.
Anyway man I dig yer stuff and it sounds killer as is,I only offered advice because you asked.
Good job.
 
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