I haven't read any of the other replies, b/c I'm listening in COMPRESSED TIME right now. I hope you're not opposed to offensive language, b/c I'd like to say that the bass fucking rules. Really.
I think the mix might be TOO dynamic...in volume, that is...I had to turn up the quieter intro quite a bit to make out the vocal, then I kinda' shit all over myself when it kicked in, lol. A little limiting's not necessarily a bad thing.
Fuck, there's that cool fucking bass again...lol. I was thinking it might be too loud, but you're really only pushing it to that volume in between some of the vocal lines, and the level seems fine elsewhere, so I guess it's cool.
I don't know how to do it, but it'd be cool if you could just make the vocal more "present,"...lol...I see people say that, and I know what they mean, but I don't know how to do it really. Great vocal, btw...again, I didn't read, but if you sang it, nice job...if not, pass on my compliments. The song's cool too...the mix isn't abrasive, b/c I'm on about my 5th listen, but something about it is making it seem "smaller" than it needs to be, and I think it's the lack of "presence" on the vocals...a thing which I have not a clue how to improve.
I don't know jack about drums, so I won't bore you there. I'd kill to be able to get a bass tone like that...you can't use it all the time, but I thought you used it well here. In fact, MAKE EVERYTHING SOUND AS "PRESENT" AS THE BASS, AND YOU'LL BE THERE, lol.
Thanks for posting