I'll give him credit, he's a lot better than I am at rappin, by far. HA.. not much credit, by sayin that though.
Uhm.. it's a fly song, and I like it, but the beat is whats gettin' me, I'm not sure that I like it that much.. I think it's that piano in the back that goes throughout the whole thing thats making me wanna stop it.
It's OK. Just like Lapse said, the piano does get a big repetitive, just take it out of a few parts though and it would be fine. Also I think it needs a nice bass line to it...