a new song

[B.SABBATH]

critisisms are:
1:Vocals(Lead and backing)are a bit more up front than I would like.

That's exactly what I'm talking about.. If you read through any of my responses, I was saying that all along.. I think it may be because not many people on this board listen to metal, and although there are many good ears around, I think they hear things from a preference perspective.. That's why I made a slightly lower vocal mix for my head.. About the bass, yeah I was slacking.. I needed to set up my 5 string, so I just layed some synth bass.. I didnt go for anything special other than warming up the guitar tone.. I'll be using real bass for the next one.. I usually do.. thanks beez! your comments reinforced what I thought..








theron - Unfortunately these were new lyrics.. I usually make them up on the spot and just jot down a few notes along the way.. They're usually always on the down side.. I try to write about other things, but lyrics like this seem to come out easily and very natural for me.. I'm sure it gets tiresome to the listener, but my tunes are usually more about the therapy for me.. I don't expect anyone to actually enjoy the lyrics.. You on the other hand have a natural knack for wording things 'poetically'.. I have the knack for wording things 'pathetically'.. thanks for your comments my friend.. I always look forward to hearing your spin on things.. I'll be sending you an email shortly btw about that other thing..






Flash - I couldn't have put it better myself.. thanks for checking it out!

 

[matty_boy]

This sound killer. Holy crap it is clean. Somebody wrote "crispy" and it made sense to me. btw I like the way the drums sound. I really really like the way the drums sound. Wow.

 

[Lopp]

Lopp - hey Lopp, always cool to hear from you.. That is the first time I ever heard 'Nevermore' mentioned on this site.. A friend of mine just started getting me into them.. 'The heart collector' is my favorite tune so far.. We should do a collaboration forged by metal.. thanks for dropping a comment man.. and remember, "Crush your enemies"

I'd give my dog's left nut to do a collaboration with ya. Especially with the hint of the Ozz man in your voice. Too bad I haven't been writing much lately (lotsa work, weekly gig, family, etc.) I'll PM ya if I ever free up some time and get the creative juices flowing.

 

[W.I.S.C.]

Solid Gold Again

Moody,Thoughtful...Agian another great jam.a little more 'verb on the snare.your style is really becoming defined...but now I'll only be expecting great things so DON'T SUCK!!!Nice Giutar sound,hope I can get my J-station to sound that good in the future.Vox a little loud but all in all a solid tune.