Well, I like where this is going but there's something about it that doesn't keep me noddin'.
It's hot as hell, don't get me wrong. I think it needs to have a different "clap" to it. Instead of that sound like you poppin' a cork off of a bottle.
I think a nice hi-hat tappin' in the background to the beat would feed it out a bit more.
ta -tatata- ta -tatata-
Somethin' like that.
The kick is distorting, but that could just be my headphones.
that synth about 1:20 in kinda doesn't fit, in my opinion.
Wow, I must be in a bad mood, I'm really criticizing. I'll quit.
Shits hot, I just think a couple tweaks would help it out tremendously. But that's just me.
Or if you want we can turn this into a Gully/Noddy collab; youd just have to send me the tempo and wav file
But if you do that take the drums out completly