2 new acoustic tunes by me

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Happily Ever After

Initial impression - very nice to listen to, I'm enjoyin it.

I think that the little diddy that starts around :32 shouldn't be panned completely to the right. Mix that a little more into both channels, make that sound a little more open!

You should really consider mic'ing your guitar, as I know your taylor produces a beautiful sound. You really want to let it shine! Don't let that pickup of yours hold your sound back. Any microphone could surely give you something you might like a little more than what you have right now, although that may have been the sound you wanted. At least give a microphone a shot.

I really like the bridge in this song. Sounds like a pretty happy song, enjoyed it alot.


Dardanelle

Initial impression - good feel, I really like your guitar tone in this song, sounds alot more natural. It sounds like you spent a bit of time on this.

The vibrato synthesizer in the back is working really well.

I'd remove some of the low-mids on the snare when it kicks in. It comes in a little abruptly. Try reducing the volume a little too.

I especially like the part at 2:25, you have good chops my friend.



Overall I like what's going on here. If you could get these recorded with better drum samples, or with that mic'd guitar, i'm sure you'd like it even more.

Your sound, and style really remind me of an artist my parents like to listen to.
http://www.leoagosselin.com/
Check out the tunes from his 1997 border crossing album specifically.

He plays a chapman stick which is a pretty interesting instrument. Check the link above, maybe you're interested.

Keep up the good work
 
Both songs have really nice atmospheres, I like them a lot! Your playing has nice groove and sort of laid back feel. Harmonies are quite traditional, but even so, the songs work really well, bringing back good memories and feeling of summer. I'm not good at pointing out possible technical problems because I'm so bad at mixing/mastering etc. but to my ears the songs sounds quite whole and balanced.
 
I appreciate your input very much! I know I still have a lot to learn, and I'm tryin'! :)

I'll take your advice on the mix, and I'm definitely going to mic the guitar for the tune I'm working on.

Thank you very much for listening!
 
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