2 Full Demos |

[dgrswe]

The songs are not fully done and i still have some stuff to finish on it. I made the one that was short a bit longer with some more feelings for it. and the other one i just started at in about an hour ago.
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[K-dub]

In the first, the synth lead that enters about 55 secs in is too loud. It kills everything behind it. Some good ideas overall, though. I like the snap fingers effect.

The second is also a good start - again similarly good spread and tight low end, and some interesting groove thoughts ... but the second is a bit more repetitive with the motiff - watch the "sameness" and don't let it get "too linear".

 

[dgrswe]

In the first, the synth lead that enters about 55 secs in is too loud. It kills everything behind it. Some good ideas overall, though. I like the snap fingers effect.

The second is also a good start - again similarly good spread and tight low end, and some interesting groove thoughts ... but the second is a bit more repetitive with the motiff - watch the "sameness" and don't let it get "too linear".

Thank you so much again for the feedback. Im going to make the leads in the second verse lower. And i also do have to make different "styles" and not go after the same all time. But currently im getting them good together so i can mashup them all in a remix later on! But i will try and make some changes to the second one, make it more interesting and different. and i will also do some more sound changes on the first one!