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    Smash - Alt Rock

    Smash_6 by Peter D Jakobsen | Free Listening on SoundCloud A song I am working on.. How is the mix? Any tips and tricks?
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    Like A Candle

    Like A Candle by Peter D Jakobsen | Free Listening on SoundCloud Am I mixing it too loud? Any suggestions, not just to the mix but overall?
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    Sorjourn - Indie poprock melody

    Sojourn by The Source | Free Listening on SoundCloud Been working on this for a few days. I think it’s missing something. There’s a part without melody, but except that there’s something odd going on soundwise.
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    New song in progress

    Untold by The Source | Free Listening on SoundCloud Here is an updated Version: Thank you by The Source | Free Listening on SoundCloud A "song" without melody and lyrics, except in parts... (last part of verses) Mixing is one thing.. and arranging, but what I really struggle with is the...
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    Temporary Awake

    Temporary Awake by The Source | Free Listening on SoundCloud Latest update: Temporary Awake Mod2 by The Source | Free Listening on SoundCloud Hi. This is a tune I am working on. Lyrics not yet finished, and so on... Any suggestions about the mix? I havent used a reference mix yet...
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    Turning around

    Listen to Turnin around by Peter D Jakobsen #np on #SoundCloud https://soundcloud.com/peter-d-jakobsen/turnin-around https://soundcloud.com/peter-d-jakobsen/turning-around updated track :) Probably a lot of issues and adjustments needed.. perhaps even re-arrangements etc
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    Selling songs

    Hi. In your opinion, which site is the best site for handing your songs over to other artists or commersials, tv etc?
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    Lift Your Eyes

    Any thoughts on this one? https://soundcloud.com/peter-d-jakobsen/lift-your-eyes Thanks, in advance!
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    Cornerstone (made today)

    Cornerstone UPDATED Your thoughts and comments are greatly appreciated. https://soundcloud.com/thesource777/cornerstone
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    In His Arms

    In His Arms (Updated) Too bright? https://soundcloud.com/peter-d-jakobsen/in-his-arms Updated version: https://soundcloud.com/peter-d-jakobsen/in-his-arms-1
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    The beggar

    The beggar (Updated AGAIN) Any thoughts greatly appreciated! https://soundcloud.com/p_djuplasti/the-beggar-1 Song is no more available!
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    The beggar

    He is living from hand to mouth.. He's dragging his home around.. He sits down by the ATM. He's hoping for some money in his hand. Last night he stayed in a parking house. With cops around, chasing like cats and mouse. And after 5 hours of sleep. He's right back...
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    In the end (A refrain so far)

    English isn't my mother tongue. And this lyric may be provocative to some, still I'd be very glad if you could give me some feedback or suggestions etc. Thanks! Refrain: In the last days we'll see clear. What is of love, what is of fear. All of our work, will unfold. Did we...
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    Conselution (Please comment)

    https://soundcloud.com/peter-d-jakobsen/conselution I keep spewing out songs nowadays, for better or worst as they say. Any thoughts?
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    Love (My ears are deaf)

    https://soundcloud.com/peter-d-jakobsen/love Hope I'm not spamming this forum, but I did this song tonight. So I'm kind of suspecting a lot of negative critique on this one. I don't really know what I'm doing wrong here. Please share your expertise! :D
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