I love you inside out

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I love you inside out
©2014 Irwin Abrigo

- (Verse 1)
today is your day
I wanna do things your way
Lift the spirit high
and make it a special day
Tonight will come a live
I'm gonna lay at your side
And we'll be making love
Just like the first time

- (Chorus)
You're a special lady
and I love you only
I'll give my heart and soul
unto you baby
There ain't nothing I wouldn't do
for you
And in my heart there ain't no doubt
I'm the one who loves you inside out

- (Verse 2)
Honey it's okay
I wanna to know your wishes
Your wish is my command
I'll do what you say
Tonight we'll light a fire
I'm gonna take you higher
Hold you in my arms
Like I've hold no other

- (Chorus)
You're a special lady
and I love you only
I'll give my heart and soul
unto you baby
There ain't nothing I wouldn't do
for you
And in my heart there ain't no doubt
I'm the one who loves you inside out
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Inside out there ain't no doubt
There ain't no doubt that I'm the one
I'm the one who loves you you know It's true
You know I do and I care for you
Truly you have proven
With no doubt
I'm the one, who loves you
inside out
I love you inside out
Inside out...

You're a special one
You're special to me
Oh baby !
I wanna spend the rest of my life
With you....
Inside out there ain't no doubt
There ain't no doubt that I'm the one
I'm the one who loves you you know It's true
Ooh I love you inside, inside, inside out.
 
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Your vocalist has serious chops. Good arrangement. The whole mix was too wet for my tastes. The reverb kind of washed out the details. Maybe that what you were aiming for. It sounds like a large hall, whereas a more intimate space would do more for me. The synth strings weren't as convincing as they might be. Anyway, you seem like you know what you are doing, so take this with a grain of salt.

I hope you'll take the time to comment on tracks others have posted.
 
Is the intro in a different tempo to the first verse, or is the timing off? It doesn't sound right at all, there's an obvious issue there for me, it's fine after the chorus so I think you've just lined somethin up a bit late.

I agree that the reverb is a bit much, it might be the wet/dry mix. Drums are a bit far back.

Synth sounds a bit unrealistic.

Vocalist is great.
 
Robus said:
Your vocalist has serious chops. Good arrangement. The whole mix was too wet for my tastes. The reverb kind of washed out the details. Maybe that what you were aiming for. It sounds like a large hall, whereas a more intimate space would do more for me. The synth strings weren't as convincing as they might be. Anyway, you seem like you know what you are doing, so take this with a grain of salt.

I hope you'll take the time to comment on tracks others have posted.
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Hi Robus, I am taking the comments you have made very seriously and I will also be making comments on tracks that others may posted here too.

Thanks for the reply

Irwin
Song writer
 
PhilLondon said:
Is the intro in a different tempo to the first verse, or is the timing off? It doesn't sound right at all, there's an obvious issue there for me, it's fine after the chorus so I think you've just lined somethin up a bit late.

I agree that the reverb is a bit much, it might be the wet/dry mix. Drums are a bit far back.

Synth sounds a bit unrealistic.

Vocalist is great.
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Hi PhilLondon,

I have to first say that I appreciate you taking the time out to listen to my song. Thank you very much for the reply.

I have written this song but I had a producer done the production. Should I do another demo?

Irwin

Song writer
 
Well, I hate finding timing issues on my songs after I think I've finished them. Even tiny little timing issues in solos where one note pops out at me has led me to redo the whole thing.

I'm not sure what it is to be honest. I've lined it up with a metronome and the beat appears to be in time, but there's something there that is making me think there's a timing error. Could be an instrument not lined up correctly.

This sub forum is primarily for advice on the mix, so if you didn't do the mixing then it's going to be difficult for you to correct it, and then post back and quickly rectify anything. This could be a very long and frustrating experience for you, and anyone who chooses to help you.

The one who should be asking is the producer as he can quickly fix anything and post back for advice. But if all you do is inform him of that timing/section lining up error it will sound more professional already. But really, it's fairly good aside from that.

Edit - I've listened to it too many times that it all sounds normal now :facepalm:, can anyone else hear anything? It's at 0.15 at the changeover.

Edit 2: I've just realised the vocalist is not a woman, so my mind is blown. What a voice.
 
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I heard no timing issues.

Revisit on the reverb would make this a lot better. Maybe a more active reverb, one for the instruments, one for the vocal and then adding more where you want the sustain, then pull it back for the other parts of the song. Just suggestions, but the song would improve with a revist to the reverb.

Vocal is really good.

Take this as just a guy with an opinion. I have no credentials to back up anything I am saying.
My biggest complaint is around production decisions. Rather cheesy, a great voice like this could have had less synth, less reverb and more organic instruments, given it a more modern production and made this less retro and more contemporary. Really stellar voice and performance overall.
 
It's the vocal that comes in slightly early. I'm like 90% sure. It comes in on the beat on the second verse but the first verse it's early so it sounds like it's rushing. I seem to be really sensitive to timing issues so this might be a really minor thing for others, but it's fairly obvious to me.

DM60 said:
Take this as just a guy with an opinion. I have no credentials to back up anything I am saying.
My biggest complaint is around production decisions. Rather cheesy, a great voice like this could have had less synth, less reverb and more organic instruments, given it a more modern production and made this less retro and more contemporary. Really stellar voice and performance overall.
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I agree. There is a very 70's ballad vibe going on, but the dudes voice is great.
 
Hi again,

PhilLondon,DM60, I think we all agrees that the singer has a great singing voice. He likes my song writing style in fact he looks up to my compositions so we are a collaborating team But we need a good producer to come on board our team, so you guy can see that we are badly in need of help.

PRODUCER NEED
 
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Hi again,

PhilLondon,DM60, I think we all agrees that the singer has a great singing voice. He likes my song writing style in fact he looks up to my compositions so we are a collaborating team But we need a good producer to come on board our team, so you guy can see that we are badly in need of help.

PRODUCER NEED
 
I would suggest, if you have people who play instruments, start there. Start with being natural, organic. Once you have that, then you can add the flavor as you want (season to taste). Add the synthesizers to add swells to support the song, add reverb first as a glue, then as an effect when you feel it servers the song.

I think you have all of the ingredients, just step back and try the less is more approach. Then add to the song to give it wow factor (not too much wow, then it isn't wow).

Try it, I think you will like the results. Talent doesn't need a lot of fluff. I think you guys have talent.
 
PhilLondon said:
Is the intro in a different tempo to the first verse, or is the timing off? It doesn't sound right at all, there's an obvious issue there for me, it's fine after the chorus so I think you've just lined somethin up a bit late.

I agree that the reverb is a bit much, it might be the wet/dry mix. Drums are a bit far back.

Synth sounds a bit unrealistic.

Vocalist is great.
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The tempo is dead on the whole way through. I'm not sure what you're hearing, PhilLondon. But I've listened to the intro through the second verse three times now, and I can find no change, or problem with the timing, tempo, or anything.
 
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The tempo is dead on the whole way through. I'm not sure what you're hearing, PhilLondon. But I've listened to the intro through the second verse three times now, and I can find no change, or problem with the timing, tempo, or anything.
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I'm pretty sure it was the vocal coming in a little early. I heard it when I opened it up a few minutes ago, but I can't hear anything now because I've listened to it so many times in 15 minutes that anything I could hear is just normal now. :D

I'll give it another listen in a few days, but it is minor, if anything is even there.
 
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Irwin abrigo said:
Hi again,

PhilLondon,DM60, I think we all agrees that the singer has a great singing voice. He likes my song writing style in fact he looks up to my compositions so we are a collaborating team But we need a good producer to come on board our team, so you guy can see that we are badly in need of help.

PRODUCER NEED
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Well if you wanted to modernise it it would sound completely different and the arrangement, instruments, mix would need to be changed. It reminds me a lot of the Carpenters. This is not a criticism, you might have been going for that and Superstar by them is one of my favourite songs (Although the Sonic Youth version is much better).

It depends what you were going for. What do you want it to sound like? Modern, retro, any bands or songs?
 
the main vocals seems to crackle from time to time, as the main track been saturated? or maybe its some saturation plugin that doing that, otherwise the "ss" are waaaaay too poppy especially since you've made the vocals very wet. I'd multiband the highend of the fx or de-ess it or maybe its the main vocals. The instruments seems very right to me, maybe a little bit too buried behind the vocals. Overall good i must say. Take care
 
Hi Vigo, I do appreciate your input about my song. I thank you very much for taking the time out to listen and reply. please feel free to comment on any other song that I may post here.

Thanks again

Irwin
 
i really liked it. i'm a big fan of this type of music and really enjoyed listening to it. your vocalists voice was amazing :)
 
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