Valentines Song Needs a Few Ears.

[Robertt8]

Hey guys!

Here’s a little tune written about my wife.

Since Valentines Day is approaching, It seems like a perfect one to release as a single for such an occasion.

That said, please let me know if you’re hearing any problems or anything I should be worried about before this goes up on iTunes.

Cheers!
Tait

 

[Pinky]

Sounds like the annoying commercial, when I hear that cheap plastic guitar and know it's time to fast forward the DVR. [I don't even know what the commercial is for, namely because the music is so over the top hipster I'm conditioned to fast forward/mute as quickly as possible]

The accompanying vocals are slightly overpowering due to scant instrumentation. I like the idea a lot (deeper background vocals hard panned), it just might be too much of a good thing.

No other suggestions, it's solid for what it is. Only a little vomit in my mouth.

 

[Robertt8]

Sounds like the annoying commercial, when I hear that cheap plastic guitar and know it's time to fast forward the DVR. [I don't even know what the commercial is for, namely because the music is so over the top hipster I'm conditioned to fast forward/mute as quickly as possible]

The accompanying vocals are slightly overpowering due to scant instrumentation. I like the idea a lot (deeper background vocals hard panned), it just might be too much of a good thing.

No other suggestions, it's solid for what it is. Only a little vomit in my mouth.

Sweet! Annoying commercials sell stuff. That's perfect.

What plastic guitar are you referring to? the Ukelele's?

Never had anything I've done been called hipster, but I'll take it.

I've suspected the voice could be a little loud. might have to take it down a db.

Thanks!

 

[Schwarzenyaeger]

Well, Ukeleleleleleles sound cheesy by default. Not much you can about that.

The vocal is very nice. I liked the hard panned backing vox. I'd leave the levels.
The Ukaleyluh on the right had a little bum not or screetch every now and then. Just 3-4 times in total. Nothing I'd write home about though.
Hand claps are a bit muffled.

 

[Pinky]

What plastic guitar are you referring to? the Ukelele's?

Never had anything I've done been called hipster, but I'll take it.

Yeah the Ukes. Not my favorite guitar tone.

I didn't think this was hipster, the commercial I'm thinking of definitely is. Unfortunately in my mind ukes now = hipster. I'm just damaged musical goods. lol