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lancelot0888
New member
Please help me again by criticizing my voice 
Hey Guys Im back! :) Please criticize my vocals/mixing again. :)
Armistice
Son of Yoda
Dude, tune your guitar and set it up properly. I didn't get to the voice...
More buzzing in that first section than you've find in a vibrator test lab.
More buzzing in that first section than you've find in a vibrator test lab.
XploZiveToyz
All American Un-American
Definitely tune the guitar! You're voice isn't unpleasant. It's a little pitchy in places and you need to work on you're phrasing. But with practice these things can be fixed. Good luck!
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Bulls Hit
Well-known member
Haha. I'm gonna steal that.
I agree with the other comments. The vocal is important but the tune has to hang together as a whole so all parts have to have the appropriate attention. I'd like to hear your vocal in front of drums and wires rather than an accoustic tune
rpm61
Person of interest
Sounds like a good song in there. I think your voice is good, but maybe you wrote this recently and haven't played it much? More practice and you'll have it down and record a better performance. Sounds like a flanger on the guitar? You might want to record the guitar straight and mix the flange in on another bus for more control on the effect. The guitar does sound awful, set it up and tune it. You recorded it through an amp right? Play with mic placements and watch the levels, it just sounds harsh. Good song, good voice, just need more practice it sounds like. Don't stop.
fritsthegirl
Taste of home
Your tune will turn into a bit more of a chooooon! if you tune. It's so easy peasy with a tuner that it's the simplest most fail proof thing you can do to improve your sound. Where are you from BTW?
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lancelot0888
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Hi! I'm from Philippines
fuzzsniffvoyage
Well-known member
The gtr is painful, the vocal not so much. Actually a pretty good voice, fits the song. And yes, tune and set up your guitar.
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lancelot0888
New member
Thank you guys!!! I need more!! 
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RAMI
Guest
Thank you guys!!! I need more!!
No you don't. For now, I'd suggest tuning the guitar and re-posting. Most people won't be able to get past that horawful guitar. Nothing wrong with your voice, though.
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