what should i add to fix/make song more interesting?

[hhinterwebz]

so i just started making this techno/metal song, and i wanna know what i should add to it. sound effects? more instruments? also any mixing tips would be appreciated, as im totally new to making computer music. here is the song.

 

[Armistice]

I think you should put it on a direct hosting site. They're not hard to find...

 

[hhinterwebz]

I think you should put it on a direct hosting site. They're not hard to find...

this is a direct hosting site. thanks for nothing.

 

[hhinterwebz]

this was a waste of time.

 

[clivus]

I just listened to your tune. I am not a big fan of this genre, so I am not the best one to critique your work, but i will comment. 1) I like the beginning of the tune, where you start with a riff and build on it. 2) To me, the song then starts wandering a bit randomly. You have some interesting ideas, but they are not tied together with purpose. Personally, I like a bit more structure to a song. Hope this helps!

DJ

 

[hhinterwebz]

I just listened to your tune. I am not a big fan of this genre, so I am not the best one to critique your work, but i will comment. 1) I like the beginning of the tune, where you start with a riff and build on it. 2) To me, the song then starts wandering a bit randomly. You have some interesting ideas, but they are not tied together with purpose. Personally, I like a bit more structure to a song. Hope this helps!

DJ

it does help, thanks! i need to build a theme to the track, you're right.

 

[JimmyS1969]

I would recommend not taking on a negative vibe towards this site. If you want some honest info, try helping out others in the MP3 clinic. You will find that better results are obtained by not being so self serving. I would give you my honest opinion now, had you not stated that "this was a waste of time". We help each other here. You are not so special to others with an attitude.

 

[hhinterwebz]

I would recommend not taking on a negative vibe towards this site. If you want some honest info, try helping out others in the MP3 clinic. You will find that better results are obtained by not being so self serving. I would give you my honest opinion now, had you not stated that "this was a waste of time". We help each other here. You are not so special to others with an attitude.

I sorry. I is sorry.