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My comments probably won't make sense, because I'm not sure I understand how to articulate this.
First - the music bed is really nice. From the sort of subdued drums to the ambient lead work, it all makes sense.
I was going to assume the drums are fake, but I think I heard a drum clam? Not a big deal.
Something about the vocal processing is bugging me, but I can't really put my finger on it. The background vocals sound phased...like maybe a chorus or something is on them? I wouldn't do that for this song.
As for the lead vocal, the verb is actually bugging me, even though it's not real pronounced. I guess what I'm saying is that you've got these really sweet guitar tones happening, and then the vocals sound like they're just in a different space...
and that space is possibly from a Kansas record from the 1970's.
It's not a performance issue. It's like Emerson Lake and Palmer singing on a John Mayer record??? lol...I suck at this.
Nice tune.
First off, it's a pretty nice with some great guitar work.
Yes, the vocals sound kind of detached from the rest, kind of floating in space.
Weakest part to me are the drums, I hear a couple of timing hitches and their sound could be more defined. A good drum sound will make a big difference here.
the drums need help. the mix and tone just seem weak. the ride seems too pronounced and the kick and snare don't grab me well.
Oh forgot about the kick. I'm on headphones so I can't be sure. But it sounds pretty wimpy to me. Not enough umph in it. Did you happen to make EQ cuts in the 300-600hz range? Sounds like it. Might have been overdone.
I'm listening to the remix version.
Love the clean tones on the guitar, really nice. What's your chain? I like how you've got the guitar noodling along behind the vocals.
I've got no problem with the vocals. I didn't listen to the previous version, so not comparing. But they sound good. I think performance is good.
I'm not crazy about the overall low end levels. I'm wondering what your mixing environment is like. Sounds to me like kick and bass are too far out front for this type of song.
Cool song. Thanks for sharing.
Yeah the BGVs are much better. The kick is way better too. It has a little bit of that "rubbery" sound to it, but way better than the first mix.
edit - are you rolling highs off of the BGVs? Kind of sounds like it. I probably wouldn't.