David Coverdale? The Whitesnake guy?
I recently had to do my best Coverdale impression for a track in a Hal Leonard book called Guitar Tab Theory.
Whaddaya think? Pass or fail? I can take it.
Sounds pretty damn good to me.
I don't know if this matters to you or not, but since you say it's for a guitar tab book, you have one chord wrong. The last chord before going to the "A" (I've made up my mind....) should be a "B", not another "D". It should go C,B,A (But I've made up my mind...).
Other than that, it sounds really good to me.
Good call.
It's rather good, actually. I don't now Coverdale's voice well enough to rate your impression, but you have a very solid rock voice.