'You're Killing Me' ... opinions please?

[Freya.G]

My latest original song. Feedback on the production in general would be great.

(Yes, it's a video but that's not the main focus which is why I didn't post this is the video production forum.)

You're Killing Me - Freya Gustava - YouTube

Thank you.

 

[talktofrank]

ok song, but great hair!!!!

 

[Freya.G]

ok song, but great hair!!!!

Haha ok then, thanks...

 

[FoulPhil]

I thought it was a cool song, but I didn't really like the music or instrumentation. The singing sounds very powerful, but the music sounds wimpy. Especially because it's just some e-drum programing and it doesn't sound like any attempt was make to make it sound as good as possible. It sounds out of the box just a beat or loop thrown in with out much thought. Much like they do in Rap/hip hip music. To be honest the music is too boring for the singing as well.

I bet it would sound bad ass with huge layers of sounds and not just an e-beat with a synth. Some guitars, some bass, some strings etc. Various melodies and harmonies to keep in interesting. That's just my opinion though I'm not insulting your music I just think it could be much better