"Your Train"--Need some feedback!

[Greykitkat36]

Just finished this one up, need some critique on the song, mix or master job. Thanks guys, I really appreciate it!

 

[Greykitkat36]

Just finished this one up, need some critique on the song, mix or master job. Thanks guys, I really appreciate it!

Any thoughts?

 

[PDP]

Sounds really nice. Mix sounds right on, excellent recording.

Cant say Im thrilled with the handclaps, maybe lower them.

Good song and vocals.

 

[TripleM]

I thought it sounded real good. Very clear vocals. Instruments sound good.

Drum pattern is a bit mundane.

 

[fuzzsniffvoyage]

The mix is fine.

But I HATE trains, songs about trains, the term train wreck ect. ect. (I work for a rail road)

 

[Mr Clean]

I really like this. Fun track. I'm with TripM on the drum beat, it's a bit plain but it works.

 

[DM60]

I thought the vocals could use a little high reduced, hand claps keep same volume but remove a little slap. On the drums, if it is MIDI drums, you could always add in some fills and fluff to give them a little more variance. I couldn't tell if they were real or not, sound OK, just needed some variation.

Nice tune and even if you didn't do any of my suggestions, it would still sound great. Really good work you've done here.