What's your opinion?

[prodbyT1]

Greetings

I am a music producer who is looking for feedback on a demo track I released which is currently in development. Please help me and provide feedback on the Mixing, Arrangement, Production, Recording and Performance/Composition.

The Beat is split into two parts so please be sure to comment on the transition and listen to all of it

 

[Slouching Raymond]

I made it to 3:42.
Turning off the listener with distortion in the first part is not going to help.
So then we get to the second part around 3 mins, and get more distortion.
I don't think I will buy the album.
I looked at the SoundCloud description, and that story didn't get me excited either.
What I heard was disjointed not very comlex ideas.
Might sound a bit negative, but hey - I listened.

 

[Papanate]

I am a music producer who is looking for feedback on a demo track I released which is currently in development. Please help me and provide feedback on the Mixing, Arrangement, Production, Recording and Performance/Composition.

Odd - what are you trying to covey? I ask because the piece doesn’t convey anything except a noise track - @Slouching Raymond is right - what’s the point of distortion in the beginning - overall it just sounds like a track that’s looking for a theme - not even in the demo stage yet IMO.