downloaded the wav (only took a minute or 2, actually...titeeee, ha.).
I think this song owns, it's my style...a bit.
my constructive comments though:
- chorus guitars (distorted) should NOT be that muffled, at all. I think they should be really bright and you should hear the crunch there, it'd make the track a ton more powerfull.
- the kick drum sounds like a fart on
my Bx5's , haha...but i don't know how to change that..i suck at the kick drum too.
- I think the snare is good, but maybe I'd turn it up - and or/ make it have a little more umph to it.
- the singer's vox are tite - his voice rules. at the end though, some of the harmony vox sounds wierd at times.
yeah in general, make this track more powerful and in your face, and I tihnk it'd own harder. ha.