We all have to start somewhere.

[Guitar1118]

Trying to post this link, we'll see if this works, It's the first song I've written and I'm not offering that as an excuse, I know it needs some work but hey! I'm having fun learning.




http://www.soundclick.com/terrymitchell

 

[RAMI]

Hard to judge a tune without vocals, but this sounds like it can definitely be a great tune. Cool riffage.

 

[Dogman]

Sounds like you are off to a good start. I like the riff. The guitar is pretty loud. I'd like to hear a finished version, when you get to that. Cool stuff.
Ed

 

[monkeymanx]

Sounds like there is a lot of clipping... Try turning down that guitar a bit and maybe lowering the low end on the kick drum... "odd at night" has some cool sounding riffs though... The "dirty rock" song is hard to listen to because of all the clipping man...