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All great! Very good work. I like the chances you take with some refreshing tone choices. It really keeps the interest up, the song never loses motion

Is he saying "is her vagina slimmy mold"????

Just kidding

Loved it, sorry I can't be of any help

Joe
 
listened to both mixes. I was hoping the second one would be more stereo, with more depth, but I guess you wanted to keep it the way it is.

I love the background vox, they sound nicely performed and mixed. Did you add chorus to them?

Good job

Al
 
Smokepole: thanks man! And about is her vagina slimmy mold".......ROFL :D (btw, saying you love it IS helpful)

A1A2: errrrr, more depth/stereo imaging? I believe you've never mentioned it before....what would you like to hear more stereo? Which instruments? Or do you mean the harmonies? As you can tell from my fixlist, I'm a pretty flexible guy :) But I need to know what you mean exactly! No chorus on the harmonies btw....a natural chorus yes (singing the same part twice), but no artifical one.
 
Just wanted to drop in to say I listened again. Sounds great! Of course I thought it was great before the "fixes". :)

By the way, I think it sounds pretty "stereo". The background vocals are panned very nicely. I really like the space.

Great job!
 
Hey Ped,
....nice remix man.
....Ah yes, the vocs at the end are better now. Nice work on everything here. I cant find a bitch anywhere.... ...a very clean recording of a well-written tune. I DIG IT:D

I listened for that sound at :33.........
TRIP, YOU PICKY BASTARD!!!!:D :D :D .....goddamn dogs ears:D Arent ya glad folks pay that kind of attention around here? ......cool!

Nice stuff Ped, GREAT work!
g
 
sorry, bud. I should have been more specific

Ok, here is what I think. those keys should be panned wider, The keys that kick in first are pretty dead center, and the second one (sustained keys) are pretty centered, too alone with the lead vocal. So, the only thing that's not dead center is the kits....

The guitar with slow attack sounds very good, stereo image wise @1:00, but then the solos sound pretty mono, maybe some panned short delay will help.

Now, don't get me wrong, I think this song kicks some serious butt, and good recording, too. But, I really would love to hear wider stereo image tho


Good job

Al
 
Smokepole said:
Is he saying "is her vagina slimmy mold"????
Joe

L.M.A.O.


Trojka,

Goede dag! Hoe gaat het ermee?... Vrouw?

Excuseert u mij !!!Met deze fantastische fingers!!!! Hoe zeg je dit in het.”multifuctionele musical excellence!!” Alstublieft!!!!! Leuk!!!!!
Ik begrijp u niet...er.. Hoe zeg je dit in het ..My Dutch Sucks?!:rolleyes:


Seriously Ped,

In my previous post, I let you know what I thought of this little gem so I will refrain from being redundant. I will state again however that it gets me right in the gut where good music ought to and is compositionally flawless.

The most evident stutter is gone @ :20, background vox are nicely settled in, I like the snare! Did you tweak it or double it? The bass is more prevalent. ( did you eq it differently or did you just separate it further?)

Once again, you are one multi-talented individual! (a bit twisted but gifted..........hey! what artist isn't? Seriously, I am getting rather fond of your unique sense of humor) You are fun!

Quality music executed with fine articulation, emotion and professionalism.

How perfect do you want/need this to be? GREAT JOB! It's cool!.............Pedicool!:cool:

Later,
Ralph

p.s. ( want me to post the lyric translation?;) .nnaaah, didn't think so! ):D
 
Pedullist my man!

I haven't D/L'd any of your songs yet because of the sign in thing with NoWhere Radio. Yes, I've no doubt you have your reasons...:(

What are the consequences of me becoming a member of NWR? Will I get spammed to the max??? Will I be eligible for discount from free-downloads... :) Will I be able to sing in tune? Will people stop me in the street and ask for my autograph? Will I be handsome, will I be rich?

I need to know these things, and I'd really like to hear your music.

--
BluesMeister
 
You'll get your hair back...

Nobody will spam you if you decide to be a member. That's the wonderful thing about NWR. Hoorah for Waldo! :D

flat-9: aw man, you crack me up. I can't describe how funny it is to read these dutch words and sentences. You're pretty good at it, btw. :D

Yes, I tweaked the snare...with a multiband compressor (very difficult to grasp, but I slowly beginning to understand how it works) and an equalizer.

Again, thanks a lot. It feels really good to hear you like it that much.

want me to post the lyric translation?

Yes, please. I loved Smokepole's version. Hilarious!

R2D2 ;)

Ok, here is what I think. those keys should be panned wider, The keys that kick in first are pretty dead center, and the second one (sustained keys) are pretty centered, too alone with the lead vocal. So, the only thing that's not dead center is the kits....

Those first keys are mono soundfonts, I'll have to do stuff with choruses or delays to make them wider. I'll try.

The second one (sustained keys) are actually two guitars. I can pan them wider, sure thing. Your wish is my command...

And about the solo...there's a huge panning delay on that one. I should turn it up.
 
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did you eq it differently or did you just separate it further?

Changed eq, and compressor. And mixed it louder....always a good way to make something 'more prevalent' LOL :D

OK....enough positivity

C'mon Sonusman....bash me! :D
 
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That sucks!
-Sonassman*








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*Sorry - No offense to the real qualified sonusman :)
 
Can't Register With NWR

Pedullist,

I went through the registration procedure with NWR and, unfortunately had to send my real e-mail addx. I got a validation code back, but when I pasted this into the log-in form at NWR, I was getting an error message that the validation code was invalid??? :(

Now I'm getting spammed to the max through my real e-mail addx. Coincidence?

So, can't log in and getting bombarded with spam.

Not happy.

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BluesMeister
 
Ped,

PM Waldo on the above and have him verify the coincidence. I personally never rec'd one ounce of spam by signing up @ NWR.

I think he might like to see BluesMeister's post so he can defend NRW, but it's none of my biz as it's your thread.

Ralph.
 
An Apology To Waldo

Waldo,

I appreciate your reply and I apologise if I have caused you any offence. That was not my intention. My intention is to log-in on NWR so I can D/L Pedullist's music.

I DID copy & paste the validation code instead of manually entering it. I'll try again this evening and see what happens.

When all else fails - read the instructions...

Can we still be friends? (Providing I get copyright permission :D)

--
BluesMeister
Feeling suitably embarrassed
 
Questions not asked, rarely get answered...

No offense caused, just the usual eye rolling...

W.
 
Argh. Die thread, die! :D (I'm getting sick of seeing my own thread come alive every week, how's that? :) )

Next time, Bluesmeister, please use PM for this. It's kinda silly to bump a thread for matters like these.

Please give other people a chance to stay a couple of days on the first page too. :)
 
Nice tune
Very well recorded.
I particularly like the way the bass comes in.
It reminds me of a Canadian artist called Remy Shand(you may of heard of him)
Anyhow good tune.

And thanks for the advice.


Lee
 
Pedullist,

This is a very professional-sounding song.

I'm a sucker for electric piano, so this starts off on the right foot for me. :)

The snare sounds a little lacking in depth. It's a bit flat, but very nice asynchronus snare during the verses.

The bass has enough presence to be heard but not domineering and underpins the drums very nicely. Later on it works in great concert with the power chords. Nice.

The vocals are truly excellent. This guy can sing. The vocal arrangement is first rate.

The guitar plays the same figure twice, but the addition of the 'scat' singing in the second 4-bars is a nice touch. The wah guitar is in complete contrast to the first guitar break and a bit more frenetic. It works for me because it's so different.

And a great ending to a great song.

It's well-recorded and well-mixed. I love those diminshed chords, take a bow.

--
BluesMeister
 
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