Vanish mix/critique

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Robus said:
It's just below, unless its fallen off the first page:

https://homerecording.com/bbs/general-discussions/mp3-mixing-clinic/jenny-jones-new-song-382850/
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I like it has a David Bowie feel. Vocals need some tightening up. Really hard to hear them during verses. Chorus they are fine tho. overall volume on the mix is low to me. Music sound great. Vocals are the only thing not sitting right for me. Needs some compression and manual volume automation edits to bring parts up and down.
 
Thanks. I'm going to need to do some manual edits on the vox. A full singer transplant is what's really needed though.
 
packrobottom said:
Fixed some of the mentioned issues.

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Sounds great!
I think that the vocals and drums can have some more volume.
The snare and kick can be a little brighter to make them pop out of the mix.
The guitar on the right sounds awesome.
The piano on the left is too loud and maybe also have too much mid range.
The muted guitar on the left and the chimey thing on the right are both a bit too quiet. They are nice parts that give a unique vibe to the song, I think you should feature them a bit more.
Kick drum and bass guitar sounds somewhat boomy, see if you can fix that and make them tighter. Maybe with some multi band compression or some EQ.

I hope this helps :)
 
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