Hi Tony,
I love the lyrics.
I hope you are singing about your wife and not the dood in the pic.
The second mix, seems to have everything too compressed...too tamed. (except the keys) The taming of those sound really good. They add a different flavour to the tune.
As for the drums, the second mix is best to my ears too. They sound very good, but coming out of the left only.
I love the tones on your guitars. That is why I like the guitars in the first mix best. It lets them shine more. An itty bitty bit of compression, so as not to rob of the dynamics perhaps? The solo at 1:19 is great!!!
The first mix, also brings out the emotion in your voice. Just an itty bitty tad too much on the reverb. Who ever would've thought, I would have spoken those words?!
So I guess what I am saying, is I am torn between the two mixes.
I am sure, I have wrought confusion in the way I worded this!!!
It is a great song Tony.