Two Songs - reviews welcome

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Not sure what kind of comments you are looking for. The guitar parts are the highlight IMO. Odd verse length on the first one. Your lyric sheets must be pages long! Kind of an 80s feel to these. Nice sound but the drums do come off a little canned.
 
LOL - no long pages of lyrics. Thanks for listening and commenting.
 
I liked the intro and the guitar parts and the arrangement is really nice...... and now on to the not so nice things.

Ashulman pointed out the drums sound really canned. I don't care much for how the voice sounds. I don't mean to be an asshole, but It sounds like you're singing with a pillow or something covering the mic. But I don't know. This may just be because of the poor quality of "hifi"-streaming. You really should have mp3:s avaliable if you want more serious mixing comments.
 
Well I don't think the 80's comment is right. This is definitely 70's sounding. I'm thinking a shade of disco mixed with a dash of Boston.

I'm not sure but I think i heard something crackling on the left at around the 2:00 minute mark. At the end of the song it started to seem really shrill and I had to turn my monitors down because I was getting a headache (maybe it's the hangover). I liked the material, good song.
 
BOSTON??? I hardly ever listen to them. Go figure!
 
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