trying my hand at something new and singing

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this is kinda new to me , lots of strings , piano , not much else...
if ya heard my last song i posted youd know what i mean by different for me..hehe

also im not realy a singer , just had a weird dream felt like writing
about it ...only the second time i really ever recorded myself singing

looking for advice like usual...i really appreciate all the feedback ive gotten on the board so far...


songs kinda untiled but it is up at



thanks alot in advance...

gary
 
I heard a few digital pops in the beggining. The synth sounds good. I'm not really into the industrial sounding style, but I'd say it sounds pretty good.
 
I could imagine a distorted guitar at 2:45...
I don't care about those pops - I like the sad mood you created in this tune

..no comments to the mix - I listened this time just over the headphones..
 
Very cool. I could also hear a little more fleshing out of the tune. Maybe some guitar and some other percussion stuff happening. But I like it as is too. I could use maybe half a db more vox, and to have the piano a tad farther back in the mix, but again: nitpicks.

Get rid of those pops and you got yourself a cool tune here.

Chris
 
Downloaded a couple days ago and listening at work on phones.

Sounds pretty good to me. Yeah some pops...

The vocals aren't bad. Need to come up in a few places.

Yeah... this could use some more instrumentation I think.

Nice job.
 
Hey, I thought the mix was excellent and I like the tone/feel of the song. I agree that the vocals are a little buried occasionally. My only other complaint is that it seems a bit strung out on the same riffs and beats. I think you could make it a lot more dynamic by adding something as the song progresses (before it reverts to the isolated piano). Maybe a subtle beat on the 8th notes. Not anything that stands out too much like a hi hat, but something that can go under the rest of the track but give it more momentum.

Anyways, it sounds great.
 
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