Trippy Rock Song (Need Critique)

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Here is a track i just finished up mixing, It's a pretty short rock tune. Kind of out there but its catchy. Let me know what you guys think in terms of the mix and if you notice anything that could be fixed

 
Just listened on headphones (at work) so I might be off a bit. I think the vox could come up just a tad. And while I like the depth going on here--feels like I'm in the room with you--the drums might be just a bit "far away." They could come up and be a bit punchier.

I love the texture of the guitars--especially the opening. Overall nice job.

P.S. Nice to see another St. Louisan on the board!
 
Its a cool tune. Nice playing by all. The vocals definitely could come up.

Personally, I would cut the intro or bring the vocals in sooner.:cool:
 
Yeah...I like it ...it sounds kinda like background for a nutty animation. But a good one.


chazba
 
The vocals need something to make them clearer - less processed so that they can be understood a little more.
It all seems a little toppy to me with almost no bottom end to speak of.
That said it's a terrific little piece & the vocals are Maynardly obscure.
 
Better than what I'm doing, but couldn't get past the high hat & ride having more presence than the snare.
 
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