Trailed (downtempo piano mix)

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Aciphecs

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Hello, here's our newest track. This will maybe be used as an intro\outro track for live play. Thanks, feedback always welcomed :D

 
I guess as an ambient effect before a gig it would work. Otherwise it's on the repetitive side - difficult to listen to as a standalone piece of music..

Little pops at :11, :53.

The 3rd section gets pretty loud relative to the others.

The transition between the second and third sections could probably be a little smoother.
 
yeah, dude... I couldn't listen to the whole thing. Stopped it at 1:30 due to repetition.
 
Big timing gark @ 0.16. Need to get step up your editing skilz
 
Thanks for the listen and feedback. This is actually meant to be two tracks, the first half as an intro and the second as outro, if we can get it mixed right. I think it's time for me to get better monitors. Both my Mackies took a dump on me within the last two months, and I'm trying to make due with a PA system that isn't meant for studio work. It's hard for me to catch the little pops and clips without proper monitoring. Time to start saving.

@Bulls hit: any advice beside "need to step up your game"? I can use all the help I can get, thanks :)
 
I'm just saying @ 0.16 you've done an edit on a couple of clips and you haven't joined them properly - the timing is out. Sounds like you've chopped a piece of one off
 
I probably did there, this was initially a 6+ minute jam that was edited down. I may have cut too much at that point, I will take a closer look and see if I can fix that. Thanks for the feedback!
 
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