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MicFlo
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Lyrics/Performance: Mike FloW
Produced by: Nova Production
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Produced by: Nova Production
www.soundclick.com/theartgallerylp
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Jhae
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Hmm, first of all the beat is nice, I like the flutes, and the cymbal hits are a nice effect to hype things up. I didn't really want to reply to this, because at first I wasn't really feeling the track to be 100% honest. Your flow is definitely on point though.
What setup are you using? Something is too loud, I think it's the track. Something just isn't clear, and I can't put my finger on it. I think it may be your voice-overs, what technique do you use to voice over your verses? Are you voicing over the last few words of each bar? Secondly, I think this song needs ad-libs to add some strength to your voice, so it's like you're hyping yourself up, know what I mean?
It seems like you're straining your voice on this track a lot...Are you flowing the entire verses on one take? Or are you punching in a few lines at a time? Maybe you should try whichever technique you're not using.
That’s just what I was able to come away with…Here's my rule when I make music, there should at least be 1-2 memorable lines in the song, so that when I'm finished listening, I can think back, and be like this or that was hot! You had a lot of potentials, it's just that your voice was kinda mundane, and it lacked ad-libs so nothing stood out exactly.
I'm not sure what your goal is, whether you wanna blow, or stick to strictly underground, but in this world of commercialism, you have to have something that stands out. You have a GOOD track, it's just that nothing stands out. After the song, I couldn't pull one line out of my head that I was able to remember.
I hope that this will provide you with some sort of basis to go forth with. I just wanted to give you my unbiased and honest opinion on what I was thinking. I listened to this three times just to make sure my comments were on point.
Holler at me, if you have any questions or comments man. I didn't have time to check out your other material, but I plan to do so when i get a chance.
Stay up mayne.
What setup are you using? Something is too loud, I think it's the track. Something just isn't clear, and I can't put my finger on it. I think it may be your voice-overs, what technique do you use to voice over your verses? Are you voicing over the last few words of each bar? Secondly, I think this song needs ad-libs to add some strength to your voice, so it's like you're hyping yourself up, know what I mean?
It seems like you're straining your voice on this track a lot...Are you flowing the entire verses on one take? Or are you punching in a few lines at a time? Maybe you should try whichever technique you're not using.
That’s just what I was able to come away with…Here's my rule when I make music, there should at least be 1-2 memorable lines in the song, so that when I'm finished listening, I can think back, and be like this or that was hot! You had a lot of potentials, it's just that your voice was kinda mundane, and it lacked ad-libs so nothing stood out exactly.
I'm not sure what your goal is, whether you wanna blow, or stick to strictly underground, but in this world of commercialism, you have to have something that stands out. You have a GOOD track, it's just that nothing stands out. After the song, I couldn't pull one line out of my head that I was able to remember.
I hope that this will provide you with some sort of basis to go forth with. I just wanted to give you my unbiased and honest opinion on what I was thinking. I listened to this three times just to make sure my comments were on point.
Holler at me, if you have any questions or comments man. I didn't have time to check out your other material, but I plan to do so when i get a chance.
Stay up mayne.
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MicFlo
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thanks I appreciate the feedback t
his is probably the best feedback I ever recieved. I did use adlibs but I guess you didn't hear them, maybe I should turn them up higher. Yea, I agree with you; I think the track was to loud, im not a very good mixer. Yea, im recording the verses in one take. This was really a metaphore, i'm not aiming for commercial or underground, just making an album for any direction. Thanks for your indepth critiquing..
pz
his is probably the best feedback I ever recieved. I did use adlibs but I guess you didn't hear them, maybe I should turn them up higher. Yea, I agree with you; I think the track was to loud, im not a very good mixer. Yea, im recording the verses in one take. This was really a metaphore, i'm not aiming for commercial or underground, just making an album for any direction. Thanks for your indepth critiquing..
pz
Change of POETS
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MicFlo...
we ain't seen you at HHAP in a minute man, stop back by..
Anyway, Jhae basically said it all...lol... I like the track, it's good. But you've made some better tracks in the past. This wasn't your best ever... If you feel that way as well, then rethink what you do nah mean? I never put something out, that I feel is less than one of my previous projects... has to be equal or better than I've ever done... Hold yourself to a higher standard nah mean?
This a good track though.
-Change
we ain't seen you at HHAP in a minute man, stop back by..
Anyway, Jhae basically said it all...lol... I like the track, it's good. But you've made some better tracks in the past. This wasn't your best ever... If you feel that way as well, then rethink what you do nah mean? I never put something out, that I feel is less than one of my previous projects... has to be equal or better than I've ever done... Hold yourself to a higher standard nah mean?
This a good track though.
-Change
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MicFlo
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thx for your feedback..
someone said this was one of my better tracks; so i'm confused i guess its opinions...
appreciate it..
pz
someone said this was one of my better tracks; so i'm confused i guess its opinions...
appreciate it..
pz
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Dj17
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i like the beat, like the flow, but the lyrics are sorf... too symbolic?