The soldier song I wrote and sang!, please look and leave me some feedbacl please

[mrman2912]

Hi I wrote and sang this song, its not perfect and will be changing the 2nd half a little to, please leave me feedback of what you think of it and ways to inprove it, thanks for looking at my post

Link to this video YouTube - The soldier song ( new song 2012 )

 

[rabia]

you removed the video?

 

[Comanchesniper]

No video there