Snakedog-I'm writing songs now with the intention of having our singer put down his vocals later, which is making me work on my song structure skills. If it was up to me I'd probably put a lead over everything I do, but I don't think that will make this particular song complete. Before I tracked the lead guitar part on this, the first bar sounded exactly like "Every breath you take" by the Police.

. It was completely unintentional, but I just about fell to the ground laughing at myself after I tracked the first guitar and bass.
Dogman- More Bass? I was afraid that this was going to be too bass heavy, but you want more?!?!?!

. This was actually the first time I used my gt brick for the bass, and it warmed up the sound quite a bit. (I suppose I could always turn the bass to 11') :0). I may just end up drinking quite a bit o Dr Pepper and coconut Rum to get up my courage to lay down some of my own vocals instead of waiting for my bands singer to do it. We shall see, we shall see!
Bigbubba-dont know what to say about the ending, maybe it'll make more sense once the vocals are mixed in. I was going for the fade out on the lead guitar type o thing with the ending, maybe I should make the outro twice as long to keep the groove going?
As always, thanks to all you guys for taking a listen, it is much appreciated.