The Letter - Finished master Rock/grunge

[La9]

Here is our latest single, The Letter.
Tried to keep the production fairly simple for this one.
Does it sound ok mix and productionwise? All comments appreciated.

(Verse 1)
There's nothing like the dark in December
You didn't mind but my mind went fullI
I spoke some words I barely can remember
You were the toreador and I was the bull

(Chorus)
Listen now, let's talk it over
Rocky Mountains stand between us
This is why I write you this letter
Come back, let's figure it out
Grand Canyon lies between us
This is why I sent you this letter

(Verse 2)
You waved the cloth in front of my eyes
I shouted words and now I do remember
I didn't care for your advice
Black Friday back in November

(Chorus)
I don't want to talk it over
Don't want to cross the Rocky Mountains
Looking out for something better
Walk away, don't turn around
No more echoes, no more sound
This is why I'm fucking burning this letter

(Outro)
This is why
I'm burning,
burning,
burning this letter
This is why I'm burning, burning, burning this letter

 

[RFR]

Yeah, that was pretty cool

 

[mark skinner]

Great song , performance and capture ! I was Really impressed with the clarity of this song and especially with it's space and depth. I think that's a little unusual for a productions in this genre. Enjoyed it .. mark

 

[Papanate]

Nice performance - great vocal too. Check your DMs.

 

[Bulls Hit]

Yeah very cool. Really like the vocals and the melody. My only crit is the kind of uberfizzy edge to the guitar. Nice job

 

[Thekesslerboy]

A hint of Black Francis and Pixies to this one. In the histrionic phrasing. I like it. I especially like the dramatic chorus. But wish it had more rhymes in the chorus to hit the points home. Really like the landscape chasms between the two characters.