The Last Man On Earth

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I like the backing except for the bass drum: to pumpy.
The main vocal is good in that it's not a standard US rapper voice in faux macho dialect.
...in his head... - the voice sounds a bit whiney though.
Lots of potential but I don't know where to offer - what's yours? all, the vox, the beat. I apologise for asking but there is a group of perfomers who just add vox to a purchased backing & it's pointless addressing any issues with that backing in that instance.
 
rayc said:
I like the backing except for the bass drum: to pumpy.
The main vocal is good in that it's not a standard US rapper voice in faux macho dialect.
...in his head... - the voice sounds a bit whiney though.
Lots of potential but I don't know where to offer - what's yours? all, the vox, the beat. I apologise for asking but there is a group of perfomers who just add vox to a purchased backing & it's pointless addressing any issues with that backing in that instance.
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The vox is the only thing that's mine, the quality, and the delivery of the vocals, I feel like those are something I can really push foward and improve upon. Thank you for the listen rayc, and especially the feedback. My whole goal is to bring something that is not based souly on rap, that I can bring almost a sing song type of sensation to a rap based song. Rap is where I started and I want to expand from it. Again thank you for the feedback, it is greatly appreciated. I'll try and catch it when I get to whiny, I can hear what your talking about.
 
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