the ghost who fell in love.....

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Cool stuff. The space sounds really weird to me. Don't know if it's what youre going for but it sounds very wet. The drums are quite loud compared to the cool sounding guitar stuff! Id bring those lighter guitars up in the mix or lower the drums. On the heavier parts the balance is a bit better but the vocals are a bit upfront for me. Good vocal performance but it's not sitting right in the mix for me. Really cool stuff. Is this your stuff? Nice.:)

On further listen, the heavy guitars sound a little out of tune and maybe could use a high end boost somewhere.
 
Hey thanks man, good to hear some cricical points. Yeah, the song's mine....is it the voice in the verse you think isn't sitting right or in the chorus? You're right that's the wet sound I was going for. I thought it would fit the theme with the ghost.....Since I recorded the track, my equipment has improved and hopefully my skills (but that's another story!)
Thanks again!
 
Pretty cool stuff. Are those real drums? If so, they were recorded really, really well.

The vocals in the chorus are really upfront. They don't sit quiet right to me. I'd bring them down some.

The verses remind me of the Deftones, which owns.
The vocals in the chorus remind me of Iron Maiden, which also owns.

Good job.
 
Cool sounding song. The singing is very good too. Definitely like Iron Maiden in that chorus part. I think somebody already said about the guitar maybe being out of tune sounding sometimes. Sounds like maybe you tuned down and your guitar may not be used to it.

Sometimes your voice is very out of key. Mainly during the bridge when you are like floating your voice and not actually saying anything.

Overall cool song and decent sounding mix.
 
Hey, thank you guys, I really appreciate all your comments...
Drums aren't real, that's Battery...
Voice sometimes out of tune - only because it's meant to sound a bit schizo in the verse and bridge...(the ghost theme again!)
The guitar...damn yeah, I tuned it down completly to D and I'm starting to notice now...
Deftones and Maiden ARE a very big compliment!

Thanks again to all of you!
 
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