Tell me your story - listen and critique

[Nightfire]

If you've heard my previous mixes you know Im working with very cheap and limited equipment here That being said, I *think* this mix ended up pretty decent. Im no longer mixing with headphones, I switched to stereo speakers which is almost as bad but it paints me a better picture of the sound.
Any and all comments/critic welcome. I am trying to learn as much about recording as I can, dont hold back

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=694078


Mike

 

[DavidK]

Needs to be louder, and the vocals need compression, they are uneven with the dynamic range.

Musically, it needs a lot more going on. Harmonies, modulations, etc. I know you have a keyboard, use it. A simple pad, just a few backing notes will fill this up nicely.

 

[Nightfire]

Thanks for the advice. I wanted this song to be pretty stipped down but I can definitely see what you mean, listening to it the next day puts things into perspective. I will add bass and keyboard later on, and try to get some female harmonies on it if I can (or if anyone here wants to add harmony that'd be great too).


Mike