Take 2

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great song. i missed it the first time around, so i don't know what got changed. I"m sure it's been said, but very James Taylorish. nice playing and writing!
 
i'm listening to take 3 and i don't have time to read all of the dialog so i apologize if i repeat something someone else said.

i NEVER say this but.....i think the vocal might be a tad loud.

i like the guitar tone. the rythm section is right for the song too. sounds a little fake but hard not to i'm sure.
 
GT

What a wonderful tune!
Very well written and arranged. I guess the voice seems out front a bit at first but it fits better as the tune moves along.
If it were me I would maybe try and bring up the highs on the percussion a tad and same for the lows (or volume) of the Bass.
Maybe it would add more "expression" to the flow of the arrangement.

Of course you could always send it to me and I could give it the old "Sounds like Ass" treatment that makes my stuff so special!
(If you like hearing ASS !)
:D


Really nice!
Joel
 
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