Stax Brix - Loose Lips Feedback

[dirtyp]

CHeck out these three pages added some remixes and new beats,new songs.
There all dated review any of them. I took some of my beats and put old raps on them and made freestyle type songs. Im looking to collab too, so contact me.Loose lips is the newest song. all feedback apreciated
My newest songs.
Loose lips
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4252158&q=hi
freestyle - Violin Villian
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4234460&q=hi
Freestyle - What it do
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4234471&q=hi

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[DavidK]

OK, I had to check out Violin Villian.

I assume the title is about that high sample? It doesnt really sound like a violin.

I would suggesting boosting the vocals up, you have to strain to hear the words. I am not a poet, I aint gonna judge your words However, musically its the only thing going on so they have to be clear.

There is a LOT of distortion on this, the levels are REALLY high and clipping. Listen to the male voice, its cracking. I like the ending, I woulda kept it going a few seconds more before fading.

 

[dirtyp]

thanks for the review I made that with old tracks I just put them on the beat.
The clipping and highs are you talking about the voice? or the beat?
I think the clipping is from my hardware cuz its always does it no matter the volume. (m-audio pre)
I just put them on a cd to test the mixing and on two of the beats the highs are way to loud.

 

[dirtyp]

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