Stax Brix - Life Of The Dammed

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Whats good? Stax Brix Just finished another single Life Of The Dammed. Check it out and tell me what you think. This is a ruff draft well redo it soon, So lend me ya ears and help with the final mix.
All feedback returned and im lookin for people to get on latest mixtape. Hit me up for collabs, beats, or whatever
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Life Of The Dammed
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5057853&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5057853&q=hi
Breath
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4981454&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4981454&q=hi

Get it How U Live 2 mixtape spots open!!! Hit me up
 
Life of the Dammed..hmmmmmm your vocals need mixed better in the track..

Breath..same goes..with this one..

i like your flow..just think you need to put more feelin into the songs..it sounds like your reading your verse..and your not putting feelin into your work..

we should be feelin the message..

good work none the less..
 
i will take a listen when i can - hopefully soon - but i would like to get a spot on that mixtape!!!

since im comin back to my senses now . . .
 
i concur with BKNot - the delivery lacks emotional conviction! message and style is effective - hook is memorable - but the emotions are the key !!!
 
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