no worries. there seem to be no problems. intonation on the bass sounds ok to me ahd the drum sounds are decent. maybe not bright enough?
want some critique on the rest of the mix? voice seems a bit dry and sounds a bit muffled, some more highs? drum same - especialy toms. great guitar tones. tight playing too!. good mix.
wow!!! we're at at the end now. yeah! cool!!!!! maybe the voices are a tad too loud? maybe a bit more compression?
Bass guit is a little bland, Kick sounds ok, little low in the mix to me. Playings very good. I think you'll survive The only thing I really didn't like is the backups at the end. Real loose sounding to me, But that's not your problem.
I like the way it kicks up a gear in the chorus, but the are guitars tending to overpower things in there, particulary the drums which fade to the background. I'd try enveloping the guitars back in the heavier parts & bring up the drums. Vocals sound good to me. Cool tune
& what's wrong with stagg & 20 yr olds?
Actually they sound fine. Some mixing issues as addressed by other above. Just throw a little peak at 3Khz on the bass.
Nice recording - good song.