Soundtrack pop tune from a rocker

[Myx62]

I did a song called New Amerika that turned out like a movie soundtrack or a senerio of things to come. It just came out of nowhere one day and I went with it.....Check it out.
http://dreamstorm.iuma.com
Myx

 

[jjtcorsair]

I like the intro with the spooky spoken voice a lot. I'm not sure I like the syncopated drum beat. As far as the mix goes: The vocals are a bit too washed out in reverb for me, but nice performance. The big guitar is a little too big for me, it obscures everything else, but it's a cool sound- just take it down once the vocals come in. I think you need to start over mix wise and keep the vocals as the center of attention with less verb and more of a center panning.

Keep at it...

Jon

 

[jamal buchet]

intro is pretty cool....i dont know..i sorta liked the the drums..?...yeah the vocals....are sorta blurry...not volume wise...but..i guess it is the reverb..or whatever effect that is......ok with"president...."...vocals clear up alot....the "nowhere to run nowhere to hide nowhere to escape the pain inside"..is alittle how do i put this......overdone?...just bein honest...to me anyway.....but mine is just one opinion... ...it seems like at some point this should break into a real aggresive heavy part....are you finished with this ?....


thanks...
jamal....and yes oregon isant exactly .."progressive"..is it ??..lol

 

[Myx62]

The song has been totally remixed a few more times acually as most of my songs are. Are we ever really finished? IUMA is messing up bad and noone can upload right now, so Im lookin for another site for my music.
Im not a vocalist, but I have been workin on my vocals and bought a shure sm57 recently and am finding the right mix for my vocal effects finally. I still plan on having a female vocalist redo most of my stuff....Its hard for me to keep the vocals the center when I suck..... I did do a song for my wayward wife and the vocals are very centered and clear, ha ha ha.....The song acually turned out well but I cant upload it yet do to the great IUMA....
Thanx for the input.
Myx